Believe

Have you every wondered? Have you every dreamt? Have you every wished upon a shooting star? Did your wishes come true? The things you wish for, Dont always come true. But that dose not mean you stop having faith that they do, You just keep believeing untill they do.

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/18/2016 10:18:00 AM

I've loved every single poem you've written. I should comment more so you know that I am here with you.

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/26/2016 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Honey I appreciate the feedback it's nice to receive :) -Love Ettie

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/1/2014 12:24:00 AM

I am a believer and I believe that you are a grand, marvelous writer. This verse reminds me of Pinocchio (DISNEY CARTOON) .... Have a sunny, crazy good day! -DWBness

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/5/2014 9:55:00 AM

Thank you David:) That means much-Love Ettie

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/30/2014 12:06:00 AM

You paint a nice, happy picture with your poem. We have go to hang on to dreams regardless of the "curve balls" life throws us. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/30/2014 10:52:00 AM

Yes That we do Matthew That we do:)Thx for your kind words they Mean much-Love Ettie

Nigel Fox

Date: 7/25/2014 3:07:00 PM

Yes I dream and I wonder - but long ago lost the need to believe - I'm happy - give it a go - perhaps it might suit you !

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/30/2014 10:50:00 AM

Well thank you :) glad you liked my poem-Love Ettie