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Poetic Form: Carpe Diem
Inspired: 2024 April 06
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I see things, and, I see life, and, I have naught the power nor desire to change life, albeit, I have the power and desire to give all things the best of life ...

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Date: 4/6/2024 3:49:00 PM
I agree with your words in this striking poem. The bolding adds strength to your words. Nicely done, Sara
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Date: 4/6/2024 3:52:00 PM
I JUST upped it a bit--probably while you were reading it--REREAD, if possible--it's infecting as well as fetching. Aloha, William

Book: Shattered Sighs