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being loved

I am 
      universe

I am 
      object of love, trust, faith

I am
      absolute

so I feel

as I walk into 
     sparkling eyes of
          my loving pet

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Darlene De Beaulieu

December 21, 2025 at 12:40 PM

Hello Thriven Mysore, yes there is love in our cats eyes. Hugs. /darlene/

Joe Maverick

May 4, 2025 at 12:07 AM

Simple yet profound...' you have brightened my Morning Thriveni.' All good wishes to you'

thriveni c mysore

May 4, 2025 at 8:41 PM

I am so happy to get such pleasant words from you dear poet. precious to me, I am grateful to you for the good wishes and blessings. Thank you dear friend.

David Crandall

May 3, 2025 at 10:50 AM

Nice ending! Your pet sounds like a dog.

thriveni c mysore

May 4, 2025 at 8:40 PM

Thank you dear friend, luckily I have dog and cat! both mischievous! Thank you for your kind visit and cheerful words dear poet.

Jaymee Thomas

April 30, 2025 at 8:59 PM

What a heart-turning and unexpected ending, Thriveni. It makes the whole piece! By ending on the pov of your pet you absolutely earn the phrases before it. You've taken words that are often overused in poetry and made them fresh again with this point of view. So well done and so subtle. <3

thriveni c mysore

May 1, 2025 at 5:00 AM

I am glad by your kind visit dear friend, I appreciate your amazing thoughts on this write. Thank you so much. thank you dear poet.

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