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being loved

I am universe I am object of love, trust, faith I am absolute so I feel as I walk into sparkling eyes of my loving pet

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/4/2025 12:07:00 AM

Simple yet profound...' you have brightened my Morning Thriveni.' All good wishes to you'

thriveni c mysore
Date: 5/4/2025 8:41:00 PM

I am so happy to get such pleasant words from you dear poet. precious to me, I am grateful to you for the good wishes and blessings. Thank you dear friend.

David Crandall

Date: 5/3/2025 10:50:00 AM

Nice ending! Your pet sounds like a dog.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 5/4/2025 8:40:00 PM

Thank you dear friend, luckily I have dog and cat! both mischievous! Thank you for your kind visit and cheerful words dear poet.

Jaymee Thomas

Date: 4/30/2025 8:59:00 PM

What a heart-turning and unexpected ending, Thriveni. It makes the whole piece! By ending on the pov of your pet you absolutely earn the phrases before it. You've taken words that are often overused in poetry and made them fresh again with this point of view. So well done and so subtle. <3

thriveni c mysore
Date: 5/1/2025 5:00:00 AM

I am glad by your kind visit dear friend, I appreciate your amazing thoughts on this write. Thank you so much. thank you dear poet.