Being Led By My Horse

Taking a walk with my horse
along this road which is the pathway
trying to look ahead to no avail
wondering will this be my day

Gazing up on high seeing the treetops
makes me think there's no limit
imaging what my possibilities can be
trying to keep faith every minute

My horse stepped always ahead
leading me in its every step
as if she knew exactly what to do
her looks showed 'your book I've read'

The flowers so pretty at the edge
makes up for the trees looking so bare
the woodland being our guard of honour
feel so special for a sight so rare

Being led by my horse
what an awesome treat
a graceful beast indeed
privileged indeed us to meet

( I have written this pondering a painting called 'The Walk', where the horse leads its lady owner through a pathway with woodland and flowers on each side of the path.)
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April 21, 2021 at 9:45 AM
A meaningful poem as you always write Gordon, God Bless you always. Hugs, Jennifer.
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April 21, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Jennifer, Glad you found it a meaningful piece to your blessed eyes, God bless you too and take care and keep safe, Blessings always, Gordon
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April 16, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Well done, Gordon! Wonderfully brought to life...I recall days such as these; only my horses never led me lol they knew to follow and were my BFFs!! I miss them. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful write of yours. Big huggs. Deb
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April 17, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thanks Deb, Glad you loved this one and found it brought back many happy memories. It's lovely sunny ??day here in Scotland, hope it's great weekend for you, blessings always,Gordon
Ashley Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Dear Gordon, beautiful imagery, thoughts and emotions stir and flow within your poem. I love the quiet trust and contemplative spirit of this lovely piece. Your poetic pen shines ever gold, my friend. Especially clever is the rhyme of limit/minute.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mcconnell Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Susan, Glad you enjoyed this piece of mine especially the contemplative spirit of this piece. Trust you're well and at peace. Blessings always,Gordon
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April 13, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Horses are among my favourite animals - they have more 'horse sense' than most. Loved this poem as I can easily visualise the scene through your description.
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 11:17 AM
We are having a great autumn thus far after a very rainy summer. I live in a summer rainfall area. At least the sunny days cheers the spirit.
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April 13, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Suzette, Glad you enjoyed it and that horses are your favourite animals. Pleased you could visualise the scene so easily. Hope it's a lovely day with you, here in Scotland it's dullish but dry, blessings,Gordon
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April 12, 2021 at 11:58 AM
- Sounds like a nice trip together with the horse ... stop a bit ... enjoy the nature - A wonderful day and poem, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 12, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, Glad you liked it and it's nature look. Trust all is well up north with you , it's lovely and sunny but rather cold here. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
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April 11, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Hi Gordon, Animals are such loyal companions. The relationship between the horse and the lady was so special. The pathway that the horse lead her on was just breathtaking. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
Mcconnell Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Thanks Alexis, Glad you enjoyed this one and indeed such loyal animals they indeed are. Take care and blessings,Gordon
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 6:58 PM
"My horse always leading me in its every step, as if she knew exactly what to do" And then you followed along. Such a wonderful feeling to have so much Faith. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
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April 11, 2021 at 12:54 AM
Thanks Brandy, Glad you thought it beautiful in many ways, Hope you're well and have a lovely day, it's a beautiful sunny morning over here. Blessings always, Gordon
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:30 PM
this is really cool. They always say you can lead a horse to water, but it's nice to see the horse this time doing the leading
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April 10, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea, Glad you found it really cool. So appreciate such a fine poet should look in on me. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon
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