Bein' Busy

Beautiful days.
Enchanting evenings.
Indulged, inspired.
Navigating naughtiness.

Busy being
Unusually unrushed.
Serenely sailing
Your yacht.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 7:05 AM
love acrostic and alliteration Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 10:09 AM
:-) I love alliteration it is such a clever poetic device I use it in a lot of poems . This is one of the fave one's I have written - quite apt - my snow sent me a pic - he's in Durham - they have deep snow! hugs Jan xx http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/scintillating_snowflakes_629280
Murray Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:48 AM
I had to look up the word alliteration Jan. Is that what it's called? I know I just like it too. Just like I do you.
Murray Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Judicious judge. Always affirmative. Never negative.
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