Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Beholding Beauty

Amazing snowflake unique pure in deep beauty 
melting within deep warmness always trusting fate

Adoring one pulse in a million skips climbing steps
forever beats true blue crystal clear begging your kiss

Night within deep chambers embers glow 
a keystone turns lights on in satin darkness

The sun smiles warm thoughts coloring frosted jewels 
gentle beams touch softly as winter ice kisses vision rainbows

Closing shutters until tomorrow comes 
as the wind whistles and howls outside reality

Awakening sweetheart delights opening flowers bloom
blossoming within nine shades of beauty dazzling rose gold

Silver lining treasure cloud kissing pearl gem precious white
sailing dreams floating magical into another space
 
kisses blown silently blushing on velvet lips of a breath
sweetly carried on a stream of air whispering cotton candy

Touching ribbons flutter in your every single breathing sigh
most beautiful love dancing with the soul crowned princess cut

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Gary Bateman January 4, 2015 at 12:10 PM Liam Mate, The Leprechaun Board of Authority likes this one very much!! Great pen my friend!! Best Always and Wash It Down with Some Irish, Gary Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 10:25 AM smiling gary it passes leprechaun seal of the shamrock approval lol wonderful comment pal bless you deeply appreciated

Robert Lindley January 4, 2015 at 2:30 AM A solid 7 my friend.. Your romantic poetry sings and inspires. A pleasure to read such eloquently crafted works my friend!! Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 10:22 AM robert your so sweet thank you kindly for the deep touching beautiful comment dear friend bless you pal

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 4, 2015 at 12:57 AM I always enjoy reading your lovely lines, Liam! Hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 10:17 AM rhonda thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 11:33 AM - One of your beautiful pearls that make my day good, dear Liam - Beautiful and romantic .... as always - (a 7 +++ :) - (empty in my thoughts for new poem today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 8, 2015 at 10:10 AM thank you anne lise dear friend for the truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated wishing you a great day

Dorian Petersen Potter January 3, 2015 at 9:14 AM Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend. Just awesome! Very dreamy and magical poem about love dreams and hopes!A very solid 7 +++ for you ! A very dazzling and romantic poem to be held so very close to ones heart. Smiling. I really enjoy it! Love it! You're pen is truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year and yours! And I do pray that all your dreams and hopes come for you true in 2015!Have a very wonderful day!God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D. Liam Mcdaid January 8, 2015 at 10:06 AM thank you dorian dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you