Behold Each Surprise

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Behold each surprise, like the wise Bliss magnetism fills us Ego illusionary dies Bubble bursts without fuss Witness consciousness, still Nectar doth overspill The joy we feel, His will Cascading bliss rise Behold each surprise 11-June-2022 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/13/2022 2:06:00 AM

I felt unexpected bliss yesterday, no idea where or why, but this is real "Bliss magnetism fills us"

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/13/2022 2:43:00 AM

Wow, Caren! Divine bliss ineffable, brought forth by magnetism! In time, it becomes a permanent embodiment of being, just like our breath. Very few imbibe bliss ~ count yourself as extremely fortunate to have been so graced

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2022 8:16:00 AM

Interesting lines penned. I wonder why the stick with two serpents stand for medical. I have always wondered that. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/11/2022 8:21:00 AM

Staff of Hermes - The two serpents represents the Ida and pingala nadis through which kundalini rises. The central funnel is the Sushumna. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nadi_(yoga)