Behold a Nation

Let's presume all is well
Though we know truly in our minds
That we are still crawling
Like a snail under its shielded carapace.

Let's presume it is well
Though we know we are not yet there
Midst nepotism and bureaucracy politics
In that which our nation is canonized

Furtherance into our country web of hierarchy
Will renounce your reliable imaginations,
Your emotional inappropriate findings,
And your shortsighted quest around time and space.

Believe it or not
Their says must be well felt
Since they are the holder
Of anything go transient tools.

In doubt or not in doubt
Mysteries will sooner than later
Unveil themselves in due time
This is not far from our reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/16/2013 3:05:00 PM
A fine first poem, perhaps [Let's ..would be best in lines 1 & 5 which is the abbreviation for Let us...] I am going forward to enjoy more of your work! Light & Love
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 5/10/2013 1:51:00 PM
Thanks for commenting. Your point is noted Debbie.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 5/10/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thanks your input.
Date: 4/10/2013 1:17:00 AM
I can't but to say thank you all for your kind comment and blessing. Yours truly~ A.O
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Date: 4/9/2013 7:00:00 PM
Dear Abdulhafeez, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I would like to wish YOU a belated Hearty WELCOME to POETRYSOUP.Congratulations onYOUR Win in Pd's Contest, also a Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Behold A Nation" I see YOU will be a Welcome addition to the SOUP Family.Thank-YOU for YOUR much appreciated Comments.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/28/2013 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Abdulhafeez xx
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Date: 3/27/2013 5:42:00 PM
A O., The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT
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Date: 3/24/2013 8:29:00 PM
A.O, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 3/25/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Pd. Good afternoon.
Date: 3/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, smashing write xx
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:54:00 PM
Abdulhafeez Oyewole, ;-) congratulations with your sweet and awesome win, in my any poem goes contest. Good Night~ LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2013 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Pd. Good afternoon says my watch. lol ~A.O
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 3/6/2013 10:25:00 PM
Thanks LINDA ~ A.O
Date: 1/8/2013 1:50:00 PM
Abdulhafeez Oyewole :-) your poem is wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Linda love... yours... Abdulhafeez
Date: 1/8/2013 12:25:00 PM
nice like it
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/10/2013 12:40:00 PM
Thanks miriam garcia... yours truly- Abdulhafeez
Date: 1/7/2013 3:24:00 PM
this is cool bro...thumbs up
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:43:00 PM
Thanks... hope you are good?... yours truly- Abdulhafeez
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