Behind the Gray

Now that you’re gone away
There’s nothing to say
And no silver line
Hidden somewhere behind the gray


Contest: Bite Size Poem No7
Sponsor Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:49 AM
Liked this!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative yet sad write. Condolences on your loss. Blessings.................
Sambourne Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 10:33 AM
A well deserved win, Jesse. Four lines that convey loss, sharply. Be well. Brian
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 5:59 AM
This is sad in its profound depth, Jesse, heartfelt condolences on your loss.... congratulations on your win:)
Rowe Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Thank you for the placement in your contest. This poem was written in response to my cousin who committed suicide.
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