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Behind the Clouds

The sun is playing hide and seek Behind some fluffy clouds Which makes it slightly overcast And keeps away the crowds. The temperature's a little cool, Quite pleasant on the beach. I slather on some sunblock Just in case the rays can reach. I'm sure that soon the sky will clear And sunshine will pour down; Then all the worshipers will flock To have their skin turn brown. This hiding game's a lot like life - Within the atmosphere There always lurks a coat of clouds Until they disappear. Our days are filled with obstacles Impeding joy and fun; But oftentimes the clouds will part And offer us some sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/14/2012 3:14:00 PM
Excellent piece!!! Bravo!!! Hugs Michael
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Date: 7/14/2012 2:49:00 PM
I really like this, Ilene! We all need to have an optimistic point of view. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/14/2012 2:43:00 PM
Ilene, I am delighted to read this creation.......this simple poem is very honest and pleasant......may I suggest something?? the theme is strong enough to support a more powerful poetic form such as (especially) sonnet......why don't you consider playing around with the content and the theme and have a go at a sonnet (or other stronger))form? I'm sure you'd enjoy the task....if you thnk I might be of some help, I would be pleased to offer suggestions etc ......with my very best wishes
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