Behind the Blind

Shadows behind blind
Nice voice filtered by thin fabric
You make me surmise

The moving outline  
Reminds the sweet, loving song 
Searching your ex-friend

Isn’t a daydream
The pensive voice of a lady
Wish to see your eyes 

Tell love behind blind
How can I trust just your words? 
Your clandestine mind 

Such love is doubtful 
From the heart or just your tongue
You make me wonder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Nicely penned.
Phengphong Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Lenny
Fleming Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:38 PM
An astute observation, Xaysouvanh. To you I say: Trust your instinct, and be aware of contradictions...For therein hides the lie! My best regards...And a peaceful and content Easter. :) john
Phengphong Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Thanks John, Happy Easter!
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