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Behind the Bike Shed

How could I forget this, behind the bike shed... my first kiss.







Entry for
My Most Unforgettable Moment in High School Poetry Contest
Sponsored by JCB Burl.
7/9/2020

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2020

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September 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM

Good one, Gary. Congratulations on your first-place win.

September 9, 2020 at 11:43 AM

Thank you Eve. :)

Richard Lamoureux

September 9, 2020 at 9:56 AM

That’s most certainly memorable. Congrats.

September 9, 2020 at 11:05 AM

Thank you Richard. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 9, 2020 at 2:57 AM

- SWEEET .... moment ... :) - Congratulations on your win, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 9, 2020 at 2:59 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

September 7, 2020 at 10:05 AM

Never something you forget....wonderful monoku.

September 7, 2020 at 11:07 AM

Thank you Jeanne. :)

September 7, 2020 at 7:18 AM

Bravo ~ the internal rhyme is most effective. Who cannot relate!? Totally charming ~

September 7, 2020 at 7:20 AM

Thank you Line. :)

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