Behind Her Eyes

The mirror holds her mystery 
and beckons figures dark 
within reflections sweet to see 
the song unleashed the spark. 

Upon the sight of what becomes 
Replayed in fevered time,
Ironically more than their love
To catch the hint of rhyme. 

Hues of blue and green eyes too 
move from left to right. 
Mysterious with flecks anew
upon seduction's night. 

What is that she dares to do 
or say or speak or feel? 
She longs to play the jester's fool 
forgetting all that's real. 

Flip the switch 
that bears the truth 
beams of light upon 
The breast of hope and ivory skin 
emotions felt so strong. 

Crave to see the lover's flesh 
thrown aside like dust. 
Dare to love her still the same 
more substance than just lust. 

Mirrors have a way of telling 
truth apart from lies 
The ecstasy and fantasy 
they lie behind her eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/19/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Juniper. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week so please post some more. Love, Carol XXXX
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Juniper Lock
Date: 10/20/2012 7:46:00 PM
Thank you so much! JL
Date: 10/15/2012 12:06:00 PM
* The Triple Crown, Precious Sweet Beautiful Juniper. Sensuous. Erotic. Profound. Brilliant. Magical. Spellbinding. Beautiful. Perfection. Tis Hard To Severe One From Another These Stanza's, Their Fragrant Beauty. 'The Breast Of Hope And Ivory Skin - Emotions Felt So Strong.' The Fifth, Would Seem To Haunt A Heart, Which Love's It So. Three For Three A Beautiful Queen In Verse In Rhyme And All Thats Sweet. A Majestic Favourite, By A Very Talented Beautiful Girl. My Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/15/2012 4:09:00 PM
thank you very much, JL
Date: 10/15/2012 1:43:00 AM
I love the meter and rhyme of this poem. Excellent work here. Bravo!
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Date: 10/15/2012 4:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, JL
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