Behind Hazy Mirror's Screen

don't keep heart in one
                                     behind hazy mirror's screen
                                        image wastes life's time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:40 AM
A truthful treasure... beautifully composed. A true pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn
Devnath  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Good afternoon, B.L. It was nice to see your senryu today. Hope you have a really great week!
Devnath  Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Good evening my lovely smiling friend and thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 2:24 PM
- Wisely written, well done dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your wonderful comment. If loved one do not take care of feeling of heart it's like keeping behind the hazy mirror where own heart can't be felt that is equivalent to wasting time only. Loved always, bl
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