Beguiled Lune

old salts reminisce
   maids with tails
   sailors nemesis

   8/ 4/ 2015.    number 3.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:53 PM
A uniquely descriptive write, George! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:23 PM
What a wonderful imagery george! Congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Hi George, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:31 AM
George, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations George:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:25 AM
I like it! Nicely done ;)
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Love that "old salts" and "maids with tails," George. Descriptive ways to describe the characters! Congrats in my contest.
Seal Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Hello Andrea, thanks for your kindness with your remarks, they are so much appreciated. A whiff of sea air on the dock of the bay worked miracles for me. Nothing like a few sea shanties and fishermens tales for whetting the appetite. My regards to you. George.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Very clever rhyme George - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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