Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Triolet

Beguiled Beauty - Win

She stands and stares in balcony
Blinds me to her beguiled beauty
My love for her is quite stormy
She stands and stares in balcony
Dark drifting clouds of agony
Soft etching to art and beauty
She stands and stares in balcony
Blinds me to her beguiled beauty.

She stands and stares in balcony
Blinds me to her beguiled beauty
Her hair lashes my effrontery
She stands and stares in balcony
Drags me down by a heart heavy
Tears fall from the eyes crazy
She stands and stares in balcony
Blinds me to her beguiled beauty.

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Date 2-1-14
Form : Triolet
Dr. Ram Mehta
Ninth Place Win
Contest: Any Poem Goes #22 by Linda

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Skat A April 30, 2014 at 9:26 PM DR, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2014 at 7:15 PM big congrats in Pd's contest, Dr. Ram. Nice to see this on the list.

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2014 at 1:24 AM Dr Ram, , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA

Huberta Van Akkeren February 15, 2014 at 7:32 PM Thank for this lovely piece...you tempt me to try writing a triolet good luck in the competition cheer Huberta

Jack Horne February 2, 2014 at 10:07 AM lovely write on Juliet, Dr Ram

Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2014 at 8:23 AM - Lovely poem "Juliet", Dr. Ram. - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode February 2, 2014 at 3:58 AM Great one again Dr , gl in the contest. Kayod5.

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2014 at 10:18 PM Triolets are so neat to read!! A nice form you chose for this great contest theme.

Scott Thirtyseven February 1, 2014 at 6:26 PM What a great poem, what an amazing form. Good luck with the competition.

Chris Boskovski February 1, 2014 at 5:45 PM Wow Dr. Ram what a very romantic and beautiful poem you have produced here. I love the repletion it adds to the poem very well! An outstanding write Dr. Ram! Good luck in the contest! :)

Daver Austin February 1, 2014 at 1:53 PM Yes. Looking at the scene from both past and future. Good to hear from you, doctor. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2014 at 12:20 PM enticing and magical,dr. ram... the rhyme, the picture your words invoke are just wonderful... i would like to thank you for putting me on your list in your recently-concluded contest.. huggs!

Carrie Richards February 1, 2014 at 10:35 AM You have tackled this contest brilliantly, and with a difficult form. Just beautiful, as if from days of old. Well done, Dr. Ram......lovely!!

Richard Lamoureux February 1, 2014 at 9:36 AM You are a romantic Dr. Ram. She sounds lovely. Thanks for choosing my poem for your contest.

Debra Squyres February 1, 2014 at 7:19 AM A form I've tried to write unsuccessfully... you seem to have it down. Lovely take on "Juliet"... nicely done !!

Russell Sivey February 1, 2014 at 7:00 AM This write is full of wondrous beauty my friend! I really loved reading this wonderful poem here this morning! What a terrific piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!