Beginning Haiku

it’s the beginning
when all is shiny and new
before the heartbreak
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 7, 2009 at 3:57 AM
J.B ,this is an awesome Haiku.Love, Carol
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July 7, 2009 at 1:49 AM
Great Haiku. New love, new world, new universe. Sara
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