Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

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Befuddled

The lighting, it was over bright
Revealing dark red blood puddled
She lay slumped, her soul in flight
The lighting, it was over bright
Exposing a play she did write
Letters of a name befuddled
The lighting, it was over bright
Revealing dark red blood puddled  

Written: Friday, June 24, 2016
Inspired by Julia Ward's contest First Line Prompt-2

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Howard Kerr May 10, 2026 at 10:01 PM An intriguing work so precise. It reads well, sustains the focus, imaginative word selection. Excellent, Sara. Happy week ahead, Howard Sara Kendrick May 11, 2026 at 4:26 AM This one was written a very long time ago. Apparently for a contest. Thank you for dropping by and reading my old ones. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2016 at 6:39 PM NIcely done for the contest!! Love the slumped line!