Rachel Sullivan Poet I do not know?

Before You Closed Your Eyes

why didnt you say goodbye 
before you closed your eyes
whydidnt you tell me 
how you were yfeeling 
i would have stoped you
i loved you
i would have stayed with yiou 
hid your guns from you
cuddled and held you
once again i loved you
what was wrong with you

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Colleen Bono November 30, 2009 at 1:00 PM This one just reminded me of what I need to do.

Jared Pickett November 24, 2009 at 7:23 PM Words can't describe how you must have felt, and still are feeling due to a tragedy of that magnitude... I know, I too have played witness of suicide... It is hard, but their pain was not meant to be flung over your shoulder.... Keep your head up.....:JP]

Colleen Bono November 24, 2009 at 11:59 AM I have already said goodbye to the people I needed to.