Before the Darkest Fall

The little sails like paper boats do watch
the rocket skies of brazen hue drink scotch.

The whir of helicopter days surround
those tower twins, so strong, with lively sound.

They take for granted torch that won’t go out
but they forget to look inside and doubt.

Those happy times before the sky turned ash
were filled with shooting stars and mermaid splash.

The window stars, not one by one, but all,
do crash in September, its darkest fall.

Remember well, those freedom hues of past,
the clouds of jellyfish, we had a blast.

5/20/2021
Rhyming Couplets
Janice Canerdy

*Fireworks resemble jellyfish with tentacles
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Wolf Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:25 PM
Terrific, Kim... That first couplet could be added on to the next anniversary edition of 'The Great Gatsby,' methinks. ~ Jay
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Thank you, Jay... <3
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 3:21 AM
Wonderful, Kim Pangie xx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:58 AM
We are so used to seeing fireworks in Malta. We even have a contest for it. Loved reading your poem. HUgs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Love that you have a contest. I loved when I visited Germany, was there on New Year’s Eve. Everyone in the villages shooting off fireworks. What a cool sight!
Alex Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:01 PM
So wonderful!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
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