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Before I Slip

Before I slip into unconsciousness I feel your warm and gentle kiss your kiss a farewell gift before the bliss the bliss of what comes next I'll miss your warm and gentle kiss your kiss as I slip into unconsciousness ©Danielle White

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 10:59:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Danielle. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/22/2010 10:35:00 AM

Still a favorite poem Danielle. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2009 9:15:00 AM

Lovely imagery and play on words.. so enjoyed .. your rhyme is so lilting and easy to read... thankxxx for sharing.. I just read your bio.. lovely woman, and from a Gemini to a Pisces .. have a good weekend... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" thankxxx for your input on the Soup Site

Adell Foster

Date: 11/2/2009 2:58:00 PM

This is an excellent write, marvelous imagery, tone and rhythmic flow. It is indeed a pleasure to have read for you. I thank you Danielle for sharing such a beautifully penned write. God Bless, Always, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2009 9:20:00 AM

It is a brighter day for me today after reading your wonderful poetry. I wish you a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration Danielle. This is going to my Favs.Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/27/2009 3:02:00 PM

Danielle, Beautifully written Rhyme. This is just the way I'd long to slip away, in the arms, final kiss of the one I love. You really pull at hour heart strings with this one. Sending good thoughts your way hoping you're doing well. Take care, Love Light Truth Patty

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/27/2009 2:45:00 PM

sweet release.... well penned, Danielle... jim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2009 2:39:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara