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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME (c)

Before His Eyes

Sickness devoured him

Death before his eyes did see

Soul's celebration







(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
        05 July 2016


5-7-5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:48 AM
- Death can be a relief - Deep and great haiku poems my friend - I love that you are using your own beautiful photo, a treat for the eyes - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 8:10 AM
- I have experienced many people who wish the death welcome - I was an adult .... before I understood it - hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:54 AM
You must know better because of your profession my dearest, friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for complimenting my flowers! Hugs!
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