Before Computers

Do you remember before computers
We actually spoke with each other
We cared whenever our kids got sick
And knew the address of our mother

Today we sit at our laptops all day
Surrounded by dirty old dishes
Wearing clothes from a two weeks ago
Smelling like a kettle of fishes

What is this crazy old world coming to
Lost sight of the things that matter
Like how many kids we had at last count
Or that we're thirty pound fatter!

We sit like a proverbial bump on a log
Our words incoherent and slurred
All kinds of animals are running about
Your pet cat just ate your pet bird

Maybe one day in a decade of two
They'll discover what once was a human
Propped in front of an ancient computer
In his ears, petunias will be bloomin'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horsman Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Brilliant Jack, I oft wonder, when upon seeing everyone around me looking at their phones, if they ever notice nature, the smell, colours, birds...We historic once gone, will leave an uncaring world. Thanks for the poem, got my imagination going,
Ellison Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 4:00 AM
Fun stuff eh! Who knows what the future will bring!!! Maybe we'll have warmth and sunshine forever! Could be!!! Cheers Happy Jack!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Hello Happy Jack, I liked it better in the olden days when people spoke to each other across the table. Now they bring their IPas with them. it is not right! Love Darlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Hello Happy Jack, I am happy that you agree. Cheers Darlene. xx oo.
Ellison Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:56 PM
I totally agree Miss Darlene!!! Cheers, Jack XOX
Koplin Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Everything is surely changing
Ellison Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 6:14 AM
We ain't seen nothing yet!!!!! LOL
Cunningham Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Lol, we're turning into tech freaks for sure.
Ellison Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Yes but some of us are just freaks! LOL
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