Newton Ranaweera Poet Than-Bauk

Bee's Kiss - Tb

Bee kisses Rose; 
Worm opposes;
He knows Bee’s drunk.
 

*A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 4, 2020)

Nov. 27, 2020
Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest 
Contest sponsor: Charles Messina

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Jan Allison December 7, 2020 at 2:31 PM Thanks for the smile Newton, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Newton Ranaweera December 7, 2020 at 3:45 PM Thank you so much, Jan, for the lovely comment and the congrats!!

Sam Kauffman December 5, 2020 at 8:56 PM Such fun Newton! A bee drunk on natures fermented nectar! Congratulations on your win with this very witty poem. Newton Ranaweera December 6, 2020 at 10:11 AM Thank you so much, Sam, for this great comment and the congrats!!

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2020 at 5:11 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest. Drunk on nectar gone bad. Ha~ Sara Newton Ranaweera December 5, 2020 at 5:18 AM Thank you so much, Sara, for your visit and the lovely comment!!

Loving Kindness December 5, 2020 at 3:58 AM Dear Newton Arch, Great writing.Congratulation on your win in the contest. May you be well and happy...! Newton Ranaweera December 5, 2020 at 5:18 AM Thank you so much, Loving Kindness, for your visit and the congrats!!

Unseeking Seeker December 4, 2020 at 6:12 PM Hahaha! Good one! Congrats on your win! Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 8:36 PM Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for your visit and the congrats!!

Eve Roper December 4, 2020 at 2:55 PM Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 2:57 PM Thank you so much, Eve, for your visit and the congratulations!!

Alexis Y. December 4, 2020 at 2:27 PM Hi Newton, Lol! This is really funny. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 2:58 PM Thank you so much, Alexis, for this great comment and the congrats!!

Gershon Wolf December 4, 2020 at 1:34 PM Congrats on your win in the contest, Newton. Hope that bee has sobered up by now. Laughter and Light, Gershon Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 2:00 PM Sure, he is, Gershon!! Thank you so much for your revisit, great comment and the congrats!!

Charles Messina December 4, 2020 at 12:31 PM Love the humor, Newton. Very clever! Love it! Congratulations on your win in my contest.. Stay well my friend. All the best.. Charlie Newton Ranaweera December 4, 2020 at 1:59 PM Thank you so much, Charles, for the great comment and the congratulations!!

Gershon Wolf November 29, 2020 at 2:37 PM Ha, ha! Never thought of a bee that way... Interesting idea: drunk on honey! ~ G.L. in the contest, Newton. ~ Buzzy the Bee Newton Ranaweera November 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM Thank you so much, Gershon, for this impressively great comment!!

Caren Krutsinger November 28, 2020 at 2:35 AM This will probably end up with a garland of flowers around its neck and a gold cup. Newton Ranaweera November 28, 2020 at 2:58 PM Thank you so much, Caren, for lovely comment!!

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2020 at 6:41 PM oh how CUTE this is!!! Newton Ranaweera November 27, 2020 at 9:28 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!

Mystic Rose Rose November 27, 2020 at 8:18 AM Drunk on love I'm sure Newton, lovely write, gl in the contest Newton Ranaweera November 27, 2020 at 11:55 AM Thank you so much, Pixie, for this lovely comment!!