Anisha Dutta Poet Haiku

Bees

  
         haughty humming bees
          move antenna merrily
          with waves of mild breeze.                
                                                      bees groan,freely fly
                                                       around nice fresh flowers.
                                                            under azure sky.
         flowers smile to bloom
            welcoming bees to taste
             nectar in bosom.
                                                     bees can suck at ease.
                                                   pollen-dust on the stigma
                                                    stick to legs of bees.
          bees and breeze carry
           pollen to spread, scatter on
              flowers' ovary.
                                                          ovulation starts.
                                                    yielding fruits with seeds inside.
                                                    plants lead life so smart.

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Karam Misra July 19, 2022 at 12:17 AM Bees do play a very important role in the propagation process! Beautiful description of pollination and the role played by the bees. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Anisha.

Matt Caliri July 17, 2022 at 11:13 AM Great job on placing 10 in my contest of 55 entries! Loved your poem structure.

Manmath Dalei September 27, 2016 at 10:10 AM Dear Anisha, u penned well. All stanzas are in haiku format. I think it is a set of haikus. Anyway brilliant write..........//Manmath Anisha Dutta September 28, 2016 at 1:52 AM I have edited and made it a series of Haiku. Now check. Manmath Dalei September 27, 2016 at 10:13 AM Humming bees (2) within 5 syllable, move antenna(2) within 7 syllable, with waves of breeze (4) within 5 syllable, hence it is in 5-7-5 syllable, ok.