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BEES Haughty humming bees move antenna merrily with waves of mild breeze. Bees groan,freely fly around nice fresh flowers. under azure sky. Flowers smile to bloom welcoming bees to taste nectar in bosom. Bees can suck at ease. Pollen-dust on the stigma stick to legs of bees. Bees and breeze carry pollen to spread, scatter on flowers' ovary. Ovulation starts. yielding fruits with seeds inside. Plants lead life so smart. 09.27.16 Re-edited on 05/25/22 Bee Creative Contest byMatt Caliri

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Date: 9/27/2016 10:10:00 AM
Dear Anisha, u penned well. All stanzas are in haiku format. I think it is a set of haikus. Anyway brilliant write..........//Manmath
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/28/2016 1:52:00 AM
I have edited and made it a series of Haiku. Now check.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 9/27/2016 10:13:00 AM
Humming bees (2) within 5 syllable, move antenna(2) within 7 syllable, with waves of breeze (4) within 5 syllable, hence it is in 5-7-5 syllable, ok.