Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Acrostic

Bees

Benign when treated well, generously leave its nectar, flying to the sky.

Excited when provoked, antenna raised, come in waves to attack!

Extract juice from flowers led by their pollen spread in the breeze. 

Skillful as none, never fail in their art; a sip of honey to us, exquisite to taste!




24/09/16
Contest BEES by Shadow hamilton
29/09/16 - 2nd prize, Glory, out of 8.

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Wendy Rycroft October 5, 2016 at 2:21 PM Good bees poem congrats xxx Sunita U.D Palawon October 7, 2016 at 5:30 AM Thanks Wendy for the visit and nice comment. GL ever! :)

Jack Eldridge October 1, 2016 at 4:35 PM Nice style Congrats JE Sunita U.D Palawon October 2, 2016 at 11:23 AM So glad to have for your visit and nice comment!Thanks :)

Alexis Y. September 30, 2016 at 10:54 PM Hi Sunita, This is a good acrostic. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis Sunita U.D Palawon October 1, 2016 at 12:10 AM Thanks for stopping by and the nice words. :) GL with your writes.

Joanna Daniel September 30, 2016 at 1:09 AM I told you this would win, didn't I? Congratulations:) well done, Sunita:) Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 10:29 PM Ya sure and you see your good wishes reached us both! Congrats to you too! :) Sunita

Joseph May September 29, 2016 at 8:44 PM Congrats on your win Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:27 AM Thanks for the appreciation and congrats to you too! :)

Charlie Smith September 29, 2016 at 8:42 PM Congratulations Sunita, well deserved honors... Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:23 AM Thanks Charlie for stopping by to congratulate me with such nice words. God bless you. :)

Wendy Rycroft September 29, 2016 at 3:29 PM Congrats well done 2nd well deserved x Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:19 AM Thanks Wendy for the kind words. Congrats to you on your placing high. Hugs Sunita :)

Eve Roper September 29, 2016 at 2:45 PM Congratulations on your win,Suita, love your poem :-) Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:09 AM Thanks Eve for always being here with nice words. Congrats to you too! :)

Beautiful Scars September 29, 2016 at 1:19 PM sweet Sunita-lovely poem about bees! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:08 AM Laura let me congratulate you for the superb 1st place win! Thanks for the visit and good words. GL in your endeavors. :)

Sandra Haight September 29, 2016 at 12:16 PM Sunita, congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:07 AM Thanks Sandra. It was a pleasure writing for the contest and as I was short of time chose a short form! :) GL to you in your writes.

Anu Nayak September 29, 2016 at 12:01 PM WOW!!! So beautifully written Sunita! Brief and fabulous!!! hearty congrats on the great win for this lovely acrostic // love, Anu:) Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:05 AM Glad you appreciate it. Thanks for the visit and nice comment. Congrats to you too! :)

Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2016 at 11:57 AM Love your opening. Great word to use. Congrats kn your win, Sunita! Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:04 AM Thanks Kim for stopping by to congratulate me. Good luck in your endeavors. :)

Shadow Hamilton September 29, 2016 at 11:39 AM superb acrostic Sunita congrats on 2nd hugs Sunita U.D Palawon September 30, 2016 at 12:02 AM Thanks Shadow (I like this name of yours, quite rare. We say Chayya in Hindi) for the appreciation and placing. I enjoyed the contest and congrats to all the winners! :)

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2016 at 12:19 AM hey, I love the succinct way in which you pulled off this challenge, sweetie. I hope we both do well in this contest. Sunita U.D Palawon September 29, 2016 at 6:38 AM Ha Ha ha! then Good luck to us both!X]

Supraja Kannan September 28, 2016 at 8:09 AM So beautifully written... Hope it does well in the contest... A big 7... Sunita U.D Palawon September 28, 2016 at 9:08 AM Thanks for the read and warm wishes. Happy you liked it.God bless you :)

Joanna Daniel September 27, 2016 at 8:22 AM Oh wow, this one is excellent, Sunita:) so much said beautifully in so little words:) sure to win:) Sunita U.D Palawon September 27, 2016 at 11:27 AM Thanks for the appreciation friend. I'm so glad you like it. GL to you too! :)

Poet Destroyer A September 25, 2016 at 12:17 AM ha, Yup, that's the best bee Acrostic, I've ever read. a 7 for sure. LINDA Sunita U.D Palawon September 25, 2016 at 5:25 AM Glad for the high rating! appreciate your visit and comment. Thanks Linda. All the best. :)