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Bees

Benign when treated well, generously leave its nectar, flying to the sky. Excited when provoked, antenna raised, come in waves to attack! Extract juice from flowers led by their pollen spread in the breeze. Skillful as none, never fail in their art; a sip of honey to us, exquisite to taste! 24/09/16 Contest BEES by Shadow hamilton 29/09/16 - 2nd prize, Glory, out of 8.

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/5/2016 2:21:00 PM

Good bees poem congrats xxx

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/7/2016 5:30:00 AM

Thanks Wendy for the visit and nice comment. GL ever! :)

Jack Eldridge

Date: 10/1/2016 4:35:00 PM

Nice style Congrats JE

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/2/2016 11:23:00 AM

So glad to have for your visit and nice comment!Thanks :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/30/2016 10:54:00 PM

Hi Sunita, This is a good acrostic. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/1/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and the nice words. :) GL with your writes.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2016 1:09:00 AM

I told you this would win, didn't I? Congratulations:) well done, Sunita:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 10:29:00 PM

Ya sure and you see your good wishes reached us both! Congrats to you too! :) Sunita

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2016 8:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:27:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation and congrats to you too! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/29/2016 8:42:00 PM

Congratulations Sunita, well deserved honors...

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:23:00 AM

Thanks Charlie for stopping by to congratulate me with such nice words. God bless you. :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 9/29/2016 3:29:00 PM

Congrats well done 2nd well deserved x

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:19:00 AM

Thanks Wendy for the kind words. Congrats to you on your placing high. Hugs Sunita :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2016 2:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Suita, love your poem :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Eve for always being here with nice words. Congrats to you too! :)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/29/2016 1:19:00 PM

sweet Sunita-lovely poem about bees! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:08:00 AM

Laura let me congratulate you for the superb 1st place win! Thanks for the visit and good words. GL in your endeavors. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/29/2016 12:16:00 PM

Sunita, congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:07:00 AM

Thanks Sandra. It was a pleasure writing for the contest and as I was short of time chose a short form! :) GL to you in your writes.

Anu Nayak

Date: 9/29/2016 12:01:00 PM

WOW!!! So beautifully written Sunita! Brief and fabulous!!! hearty congrats on the great win for this lovely acrostic // love, Anu:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:05:00 AM

Glad you appreciate it. Thanks for the visit and nice comment. Congrats to you too! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/29/2016 11:57:00 AM

Love your opening. Great word to use. Congrats kn your win, Sunita!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:04:00 AM

Thanks Kim for stopping by to congratulate me. Good luck in your endeavors. :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/29/2016 11:39:00 AM

superb acrostic Sunita congrats on 2nd hugs

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/30/2016 12:02:00 AM

Thanks Shadow (I like this name of yours, quite rare. We say Chayya in Hindi) for the appreciation and placing. I enjoyed the contest and congrats to all the winners! :)