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Beer

From a bottle
to the body it settles
drinking with no fear
drunkenness is near
views are mixed up
As we turn to look up
drinking with a smile
difficulties while walking a mile
tipsy , as I am about to fall
but i cant give up a beer at all








(to be continued)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 6:16 AM
I am looking forward to the continuation of this piece...well done.
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 3:41 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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