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Been In Worse Places

the days go by and im still here the world is bright and full of cheer my eyes light up every day i love my life and want to stay and i wouldnt have it anyother way cause ive been in very bad places and now i am alright im happy and free and i love you as you love me the sky was bright all day long and now the stars shine to this, wow im loving life in an unusal way and i dont want to fly away i wouldnt have it anyother way cause ive been in very bad places and now im alright im happy and free and i love you as you love me once upon a time things were very bad i didnt want the life i had but now things changed im in a brighter place and i wouldnt have it anyother way cause ive been in very bad places and i know what makes us and now im am happy and feeling free and baby i love you as you love me

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Justin Bordner

Date: 2/12/2013 12:28:00 PM

This is a very beautiful way to express success Jay - in this write you really seem to demonstrate a respect for the hardhips, and hard places that now make this life worth enjoying - I don't think the fight will ever end, I don't think the fight is meant to end my friend - battling for these oft times brief moments of pure happiness seems to be what life is all about - J.A.B. %

Jay Loveless
Date: 2/12/2013 2:22:00 PM

Ahh, this wasnt a very well crafted piece, but yes, in this moment I was happy, and I felt that all the hardships were worth it in the end. Its hard not to struggle against that sometimes, but I still appreciate all Ive been through as its made me who I am. And It has also, blessed me with some of the most beautiful writes ive ever felt.