Doris Culverhouse Poet Narrative

Beelzebub

He roams to and fro seeking to decieve, kill and destroy
Sweet lamb eyes bat and entice your heart into contentment
Slick and pleasing until he has your life taken eternally away
Rewarding your great service until pride has you decieved to believe
"I don't need a savior" I am ok by myself, I am so smart
God will be wise to ask my advice before he plans his next move
Powers and demons attract your mind to death and hell
Brimstone begets the lake of fire forever separated from the love of God.

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Moncie Johns September 22, 2010 at 3:14 PM A really good portrayal of the Devil and the struggle within all of us. Thanks for allowing me to read it.

Hyle Chu September 11, 2010 at 10:34 AM The demon of gluttony and Lord of the Flies who revolted against Satan in some writings. Wise to disregard him.

Carolyn Devonshire September 9, 2010 at 7:40 AM Doris, I hope you have entered this in the "Eternal Figures" contest. You convey the power satan seeks to use in controlling people's lives so well. We do need God, a savior, to help us stay on a righteous path. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2010 at 3:41 AM Great write about that old serperent himself..The greatest realization is the only way I can make it is through the shed blood of Jesus....Good job..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and letting me know that I won in the contest..Mom

Sidney Hall Mad Poet September 7, 2010 at 3:06 PM Nice one D. You do come out with amazing poems. Luv Me

Vince Suzadail Jr. September 6, 2010 at 5:58 PM Easy to believe. Luckily we have a forgiving God. Vince

Daver Austin September 6, 2010 at 8:30 AM DRAMATIC! Hey! This ought to scare the sinners. I fear that Old Nick is very active these days. Good write. I have been absent for a couple of weeks. am trying to get caught up. sorry for the delay. Love, Dave

Daver Austin September 6, 2010 at 8:29 AM DRAMATIC! Hey! This ought to scare the sinners. I fear that Old Nick is very active these days. Good write. I have been absent for a couple of weeks. am trying to get caught up. sorry for the delay. Love, Dave

Cecil Hickman September 5, 2010 at 9:06 PM a very deep piece that shows the evil which is around along with the truth of his love,,Thank You for reading my words and leaving yours behind,,I am completely behind in reading others words, this weekend I am trying to catch up,though i know i never will,,,Blessings..Cecil