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Bee

yellow and black buzz
                            ing yellow and black b
                            uzzi              ng yello
                            w a              nd blac
                            k bu             zzing y
                            ellow and black buzzi 
                            ng yellow and black b
                            uzz              ing yell
                            ow a            nd blac
                            k bu             zzing y
                            ellow and black buzzi
                            ng yellow and black b


                           are attracted to flowers
                           are attracted to flowers
                           are at
                           tracte
                           d to flowers
                           are attracte
                           d to f
                           lower
                           s are attracted to flowe
                           rs are attracted to flow


                          most people swat at them
                          most people swat at them
                          most p
                          eople s
                          wat at them m
                          ost people swa
                          t at t
                          hem m
                          ost people swat at them
                          most people swat at them



                                                 P.R.Deremer

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Brian Sambourne October 24, 2020 at 10:04 AM Superb structural poem. Enjoyed the read. So creative. Brian

Pashang Salehi October 16, 2015 at 4:22 PM Pam I did not understand all the buzz and the fuzz..... good luck Pam Deremer October 16, 2015 at 4:48 PM It is a Haiku poem in the letters that spell BEE. The first letter repeats the short line of " Yellow and black buzzing" which is part of a picture of a bee. The next letter says "attracted to flowers." The 3rd letter says " most people swat at them." on each letter I just kept repeating the statement for that letter. If you follow each letter you will see that each word is there. Does that help?

Beautiful Scars October 6, 2015 at 3:50 PM Love it! so cute! :)

Cherl Dunn October 5, 2015 at 9:13 PM Dear Pam I adore your style and form concept, it's just a fabulous outstanding form bravo, and thanks for your comment of worry, but I'm a tough old gal not that old but right now I feel anicent, lol cheri

Njeri Hunjeri September 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM this is so creative. i like this new style you have going on here. 7++ Pam Deremer September 29, 2015 at 1:58 PM Thank you.

David Scott September 29, 2015 at 11:24 AM unasll diffrent like your poem thankyou for your kind words on mine fate poem which is a revised version of an old write i have not been on here for last eight months so not chance to write much david scottxx Pam Deremer September 29, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thank you for reading my work.

David Mcsorley September 29, 2015 at 6:43 AM Pam that's really cool, love the way you've set it out. Thanks for the review of my poem, Dave Pam Deremer September 29, 2015 at 12:14 PM Thank you for your comment.

Cherl Dunn September 28, 2015 at 5:28 PM Dear Pam Clever and creative, love the BEE design, simply wonderful, amazing I'm going to read a few more of yours, and thanks for the review of mine also, cheri Pam Deremer September 28, 2015 at 7:28 PM Thank you so much.

Pat Davis September 25, 2015 at 12:21 AM Pam, you are so creative and amazing! Pat Pam Deremer September 25, 2015 at 11:12 AM Thank you so much!