Bedtime Stories

Dark trees hover over me.
I’m left in the woods.
Sounds and even owls, don’t lighten the mood.
Lost with my map, I cry, I pant.
Looking left and trying to find the right path.
Somebody save me,  there is something lurking behind me.
It’s creeping and crawling and it’s right there! It surprised me.
It grabs a hold of me tightly, and speaks into my ear.
“ Goodnight my sweet darling, the morning will soon appear."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:43 PM
what a cool take on being read a bedtime story!! Much enjoyed, Congrats on your win.
Oyewole Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on the win!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:28 AM
- Hello Elizabeth, congratulations on your nice winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:10 AM
A classic! Congrats on your win
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Elizabeth.
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:23 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, elizabeth
Enriquez Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Dear Elizabeth: Nice twist in last two lines. Leon
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