Bedroom Eyes

In the glow of the moon I’m spellbound as her eyes of green shine bright causing my heart to swoon; love abound, filling fantasies with delight. Those bedroom eyes beckon my passion, longing for warmth in love’s embrace; together hearts reckon in fashion becoming one as souls enlace. Her whispers awaken my desires as light beams down from moon above; caresses leave me shaken, lighting fires, as bedroom eyes beckon love.
December 23, 2018
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Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 4:41 PM
so romantic. Big congrats in Brian's contest.
Gondolf Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Nicole Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Eyes certainly can create a breathtaking mood, as does your poem. Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, Brandy, for your thoughts. John
Devonshire Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Those bedroom eyes stir the passion in a man's heart, John. What a lovely, romantic poem! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Carolyn
Gondolf Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Yes those bedroom eyes are quite stirring. Thank you, Carolyn, merry Christmas! John
Nicole Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Love whispers around each and every moment. There is something magical about the moonlight, while eyes caress desires of the night. Lingering so close. This is so beautiful and romantic my dear friend. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 7:54 PM
It is a magical moment when the whispers beckon and those eyes caress the desires of the night in the glow of the soft moonlight. Thank you for sharing your thoughts my dear friend. John
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 10:35 AM
A very romantic verse John, you write these so well. Tom.
Gondolf Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments and support. John
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