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Bedroom Eyes

In the glow of the moon I’m spellbound as her eyes of green shine bright causing my heart to swoon; love abound, filling fantasies with delight. Those bedroom eyes beckon my passion, longing for warmth in love’s embrace; together hearts reckon in fashion becoming one as souls enlace. Her whispers awaken my desires as light beams down from moon above; caresses leave me shaken, lighting fires, as bedroom eyes beckon love.
December 23, 2018

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Date: 12/26/2018 4:41:00 PM
so romantic. Big congrats in Brian's contest.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 12/24/2018 10:26:00 PM
Eyes certainly can create a breathtaking mood, as does your poem. Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/25/2018 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, for your thoughts. John
Date: 12/24/2018 9:19:00 PM
Those bedroom eyes stir the passion in a man's heart, John. What a lovely, romantic poem! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Carolyn
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 10:03:00 PM
Yes those bedroom eyes are quite stirring. Thank you, Carolyn, merry Christmas! John
Date: 12/23/2018 7:17:00 PM
Love whispers around each and every moment. There is something magical about the moonlight, while eyes caress desires of the night. Lingering so close. This is so beautiful and romantic my dear friend. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/23/2018 7:54:00 PM
It is a magical moment when the whispers beckon and those eyes caress the desires of the night in the glow of the soft moonlight. Thank you for sharing your thoughts my dear friend. John
Date: 12/23/2018 10:35:00 AM
A very romantic verse John, you write these so well. Tom.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/23/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate your comments and support. John

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