Bedevil

Beware of being bedeviled Every day and night Devil takes various forms Every now and then Voyaging thru the sky In myriad colours Looking for his next victim

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2010 8:40:00 AM

Cool take on the challenge, Tahera. Luv, Andrea

John Rhinem

Date: 10/4/2010 6:46:00 AM

Smile ~ Just wanted to stop back by & say hello & "Thank You" for the kind com dear lady but as for "Pocahontus" well, there's a bit more to her than just that....Smile, "Good to Meet 'Your Beauty' Lovely Tahara Mannan &, Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Lady;' Don't Let It Get Away; 'Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves,' John!" ~ "'Vaya Con Dios;' Bye!":) ~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2010 5:23:00 AM

scary... what is that noise??? IIIEEEE!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2010 5:21:00 AM

Very creative, short , sweet and nice imagery, Tahera, Good luck in the contest,

John Rhinem

Date: 10/3/2010 11:18:00 PM

Smile ~ "Yes," always in search of but, perhaps that day is beginning to wane now &, the millenniums moments are beginning to quickly fade unto the surreal of, how, could this realities truth out of nowhere, so suddenly be; these lessons, being learned everyday now...."Great Poe; A Blessing, 'If Ones Eyes Shall Somehow, See!?'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, I notice that "Your Beauty" has another poe; let's go see.... ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2010 10:11:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.