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Poetic Form: Other (Echo Verse)

Inspired:  2023 February 08

*Echo Verse: Focus is on End Rhymes. All lines; first and last words are End Rhymes (a word with more than one syllable, the last syllable will be the End Rhyme). The next line's first word End Rhyme should rhyme with the End Rhyme of the previous line's last word. Also, the final line's last word End Rhyme should rhyme with the first line's first word End Rhyme.

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Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Blossoming flowers growth. Growth contends and assures life. Life via water and sun is nurtured. Orchard acts likewise. Allies like forests and all living things. Things that nature supports like other species. Entities from sea and land, like a woman and man. Human life, like all others, is blessed with its beginning.

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Date: 3/13/2023 10:50:00 PM
Nice Idea. Nice Composition. Nicest Style. Blessings always
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/5/2023 2:38:00 PM
Aloha, Anisha! I'm glad I went back to see if I missed anybody's comment, and I'm glad I did! You have a good heart, my friend! Aloha, William
Date: 2/13/2023 8:01:00 AM
A more elaborate defintion than I found on the internet. I enjoyed reading this one of yours. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/13/2023 9:05:00 AM
I did accentuate the form a bit to be more challenging, thanks again, Sara, and you're always welcome, Aloha William
Date: 2/8/2023 2:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this beautiful and hilarious poem, William! Your great imagery sheds more beauty on this poem.
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Date: 2/8/2023 3:12:00 PM
Mahalo, Lasaad for sharing your input and for your visit, Aloha William

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