Entry for BEAUTIFUL WORDS ARE HERE ! Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Date wrote 17th August 26
She deliberately sashayed across the room, the very breathless harbinger of lost desire; all the men whom she passed by seeming to consume this effervescent commingling of ice and fire. In an instant, witless men succumb to her becoming, as she played them like a bass fiddle, strumming.
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