Because the Fire Has Gone All Dark

Getting it out with a good shout
Now don't go and pout
Deep down inside so riddled with doubt
Need to find a safer route
Tired of fighting these heartfelt bouts

Our freedom has a way of holding the past
Before you know it you have crossed the bridge to fast
Having something special that would've of last
Oh the regrets of today
Such a heavy price we have to pay
When we just want to stay out and play

When respect goes a long ways
You can't back up with what you say
Instead, you take a different pathway
I have always prayed
That our friendship wouldn't decay
Things get broken when we don't meet halfway

Which puts us on a different highway
Alone feeling like we have just run away
Wanting to replay 
All those wonderful memories of our yesterday
If you just would've understood all the love I conveyed
Then I wouldn't be walking away feeling betrayed

Instead of watching the sunset across the bay
Bad choices that ruin a perfect ballet
You just let the good times slip away
Making it feel like you have overstayed
Time to find a stronger airway
That leads to the right kind foreplay

A woman who lives up to what she portrays
Rather then stowaway on the wings of a friends heart
Knowing this would only break us apart
You knew I wanted love from the very start
Now I'm letting go as it's time to depart 
I walk away with a dagger through my heart
Because the fire has gone all dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/31/2018 4:53:00 PM
It is a really beautiful poem, on most occasions it is basically pa boy who falls in love and even the friendship is destroyed, when a girl cares, boy think thst it is love but it is a friendship, when a boy cares, girl thinks that it is a friendship but in reality it is love, it is always worth a try but if in between the friendship is destroyed he regret is alwsys there, good luck my friend and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/18/2018 7:53:00 AM
Relationships are tricky things.. love can sneak up on a friendship.. awesome if it sneaks up on both, but when it's just one it can easily be the end of the friendship, at least as it was before! Great write, Jack
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Date: 7/18/2018 10:22:00 AM
It's risky business when friends start down this road that they can lose it all if things are not considered right from the start. Thank you, lyric man, for weighing in on this jack2.
Date: 7/17/2018 8:28:00 PM
Nice one... Friendship and a lovers relationship... Do they combine... All the best Jack
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Jack Cooper
Date: 7/17/2018 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, I think its best that we leave friends as friends and love as just that love have a great day jack2
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