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Because of You, I Can'T

Hot streams pour over and calm me Wash away your negative touch Cleanse my soul from debris From all the wont's, dont's and such Release as I may the essence The scars they never quite fade The past as strong as the present Trickle back and see the cascade My optimism shrunk in the frigid air Iced by pessimistic hissing Steamy showers try to erase despair But the doubt is strongly resisting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/21/2009 3:21:00 PM
felt like this poem should have been longer.. enjoyed it any way and enjoy your day.
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:23:00 AM
Simply amazing. Thank you for sharing the feelings pouring out of this write Angela. Love, Carol
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