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Because of Obedience

Because of obedience I have a vision My path is clear now For all my plans Are in the Lords Hands I turn my eyes away from sin My ears hears no blasphemies And for His grace My hand are clean The Lord loves me, Gives me piece And satisfies my needs When I lack I do not need Jealous are my cursed enemies For they cannot touch me I triumph over all that is against me For God fights for me

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/8/2024 9:55:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/4/2016 8:55:00 PM

Michael, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 7:32:00 PM

by the way, this is so, good. I wonder if you are accomplished :D and published somewhere. SKAT

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 7:31:00 PM

Alliterated Names are my fav......... WOW, what a verse, :D:D;D Michael, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/4/2016 6:33:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love