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Because I Love You

its because i love you daddy that i had the strength to let you go its because i love you daddy that i let you move on to begin another family and yet leave me as your bastard son its because i love you that i bore it all so that at the end of the day i will smile when you smile even though its not at me you smile not with me you smile but,your smile is my smile because i love you i love you though you left its all because i love you that i'm able to take it all inside and though you don't tap me on my shoulder though you dont hug embrace me i work hard to make you proud for i am a part of your seed and though you are not here i will always love you its because i love you that i have the strength to bear that you left

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Date: 2/24/2016 7:24:00 PM
Job, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:26:00 PM
Job, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 8/9/2013 6:19:00 AM
Touch my soul with another one. Many more!
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Date: 1/2/2013 12:29:00 PM
very moving, Job i know you speak for millions that live without their fathers, great poem!. -Lucas-
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:11:00 PM
Very touchy write and a nice tribute to your dad, Job
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:45:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your touching creative write .. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv.. check out our free contests too..
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Job. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:06:00 AM
This is a great sentimental poem....you really got the feelings across....very good.
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