Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Because I Love You

If hamburgers aren’t really made out of ham
If jelly won't work to get out of a jam
If something that’s old becomes something we knew
It don’t really matter because I love you



8/30/19
Original Poem: It don't really matter
For the: Arbitrium Divisa 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Gregory R. Barden

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Heidi Sands September 2, 2019 at 3:08 PM This is great. And so much else doesn't matter when there is love :) Chris Green September 2, 2019 at 3:17 PM Just a snippet out of one of my poems for the contest. That's what they asked for so this is what I picked out. Thank you again Heidi

Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2019 at 4:28 PM Reminds me of “roses are red, violets are blue...” a cute one Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 4:35 PM Thanks so much Kim. It was a partial poem for a contest. I believe you read the original a few years ago.

Connie Marcum Wong August 30, 2019 at 3:23 PM So true....love is the most important thing in life. Best for a win with this little pearl of wisdom Chris! xxoo Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 4:35 PM Thank you Connie. The contest rules said enter a four line verse from one of your previously posted poems that you feel could stand on its own, so I went back and found this in one of my fun pieces. I am happy you liked it.

Alexis Y. August 30, 2019 at 3:19 PM Hi Chris, This is a good entry for the contest theme. At the end of the day the only thing that really matters is the love we give, and the love we receive. I wish you the best of luck in the contest :-) Alexis Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 4:33 PM Thank you so much Alexis. You are right, that is all that matters.

Sandra Adams August 30, 2019 at 1:40 PM Beautifully penned and great choice these four lines stand on their own, Yhen again I am sure each of your poems had four lines of beauty that would stand alone :) hugs Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 1:44 PM Thanks Sandy. I just figured I'd pick a fun one to enter.