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Because He Had Been Judgemental

The beautiful orchids seemed to blossom The ambience seemed enthralling Their appearances were solemn The location was perfect for his confession. His love stood before him smiling He had been overwhelmed. "You must be sophisticated as per your upbringing, are you sure you are worth being my beloved?" Lo! There went his love unconditional because he had been judgemental! The day had arrived The one which he had dreamt of The voice inside him quivered The dream now seemed too tough. The plunge in his career that would take him to heights. "Why, you are just a person so mere, to have mastered this field's freights?" And there crashed his job incredible, because he had been judgemental. That warm hand in the chills That bear hug in times desperate giving him strength That person who stood by him during peril That smile that promised hope to no length. He sure did have a bestfriend Who supported him through thick and thin. "I suppose you are a fool to no end, because you cant in your life win." Alas! He became despicable because he had been judgemental.

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Date: 12/12/2017 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Neha.
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Neha Padhi
Date: 12/12/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/11/2017 5:28:00 PM
THANK YOU MY FRIEND. Congratulations on your win in Brenda's haters contest!
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Neha Padhi
Date: 12/11/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thank you.

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