Because He Had Been Judgemental

The beautiful orchids seemed to blossom
The ambience seemed enthralling
Their appearances were solemn
The location was perfect for his confession.

His love stood before him smiling
He had been overwhelmed.
"You must be sophisticated as per your upbringing,
are you sure you are worth being my beloved?"

Lo! There went his love unconditional
because he had been judgemental!

The day had arrived
The one which he had dreamt of
The voice inside him quivered
The dream now seemed too tough.

The plunge in his career
that would take him to heights.
"Why, you are just a person so mere,
to have mastered this field's freights?"

And there crashed his job incredible,
because he had been judgemental.

That warm hand in the chills
That bear hug in times desperate giving him strength
That person who stood by him during peril
That smile that promised hope to no length.

He sure did have a bestfriend
Who supported him through thick and thin.
"I suppose you are a fool to no end,
because you cant in your life win."

Alas! He became despicable
because he had been judgemental.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:46 AM
Congrats on your win, Neha.
Padhi Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 3:27 AM
Thank you.
Lindley Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 5:28 PM
THANK YOU MY FRIEND. Congratulations on your win in Brenda's haters contest!
Padhi Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:34 PM
Thank you.
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