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The soft waves of the sea Lapping at my feet, Tell me their secret as I sit - quietly and listen They tell me all stars and heavens exist solely for me because... They tell me colors are more intense for me because... And songs so sweetly delightful for me because.... The waves enlighten me to a purity that exists - a purity that repulses all evils because... A purity like a lance, Piercing straight to my heart because... Because of you, my true love 2/15/2014

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Date: 2/26/2014 6:24:00 PM
Amy, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love . ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:38:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, Amy
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Date: 2/19/2014 7:34:00 PM
this is such a lovely little piece; the quiet, contemplative side of love...everything seems so much brighter and sweeter when you are in love, doesn't it? congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 2/16/2014 8:26:00 AM
Just thought I'd leave a comment "Because" are truly one talented young lady.
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