Became An American From Shangshi

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Jasmine petals fall same as ashes from burnt incense, Superimposed the demised who lays in hallowed rest, A jar and vase on a marble stone, near a picket fence, A man of the Buddhist faith who fought with the best, Died for his country, a faithful man was truly blessed. 2019 December 27

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2019 10:53:00 AM

This is very nicely done, William, and the voice makes it very special. Everyone has his own country and all should be proud of their country , but how can some when their is so much terror there..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2019 12:07:00 PM

My heartfelt appreciation for your shared sentiments, --I concur ~ Aloha always William