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Beauty Walks the Street

“Raindrops fall down with blisses, sent from angels kisses.”

She walks down the wet street with her chic style
Catching eyes of passers by with her smile 
Captivated by her sheer elegance
In spite of the down pouring elements.

Her skirt sways with each step that she does take
No denying she's a beauty with grace
Moonlight and lamplight embrace all her charms
The yellow flowers she holds are enhanced.

Hair that’s flowing down with golden highlights
Illuminated in gleams of starlight
Beneath that hat, sat most elegantly 
The crowning glory of resplendency.

The click and clack of her stiletto heels
Adds to her lovely engaging appeal
The pretty lady cannot be discreet
As off she goes walking along the street.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Dear Beryl, wonderfully atmospheric and creating a sense of glamour and deliberate allure. Oh, the idea of someone who is not just walking in the scene, but who is the focal point of it, completely unfazed by the "down pouring elements." The rain just adds drama to her "chic style." Love it! Autumn Blessings, Dear Beryl, Daniel
Edmonds  Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Thank you dear Daniel, I’m overjoyed to read your comments on this poem that was inspired by the contest and the photograph. Though my poem did not make the winners list, I’m proud of it. Blessings in return to you… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:08 AM
You have brought to life a remarkable personage. Your poetry is always alluring.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Thank you very much, so nice of you Victor… Beryl
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Picture perfect poem Beryl! hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs returned Beryl xx
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