Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Beauty Pocks

As deep as beauty pocks.
It’s cheap light and moon rocks.

The pull of pow’r suspense -
A full figured expense.

A grand trip into space,
Is manned by human race.

This dame was but a child.
Launched fame ~ undaunted, wild.

7/10/2020
Verses In Essence - 8 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Aditi Mishra July 16, 2020 at 1:49 PM Such a beautiful and profound tale of the journey of mankind into space. Your words present intriguing thoughts Kim. Congratulations on your win. Much love :) Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2020 at 5:23 PM Thanks, Aditi, my friend!

Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2020 at 3:18 AM Congratulations on a win, no doubt in my mind if I had read this before. But now that I have, I fully get it. Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2020 at 5:58 AM Thank you, Caren!

John Watt July 12, 2020 at 8:10 PM Nicely crafted, Kim. Brought back memories of the missions to the moon. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 10:23 PM Thank you, John!

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 4:23 AM A lively piece, Kim, I am blessed to have read it, my compliments for your righteous efforts and for your placing truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 6:48 AM Thank you, William!

Joseph May July 11, 2020 at 5:25 PM Very nicely written Kim, Congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2020 at 6:47 AM Thank you, Joe!

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 2:06 PM Well done, KIm. Congrats for your win. Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2020 at 3:05 PM Thank you, beautiful friend!

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2020 at 7:13 PM The open bar is now serving 'cheap light and moon rocks. Don't know why, but something struck me that way. ~ Lite Beer, anyone?! lol. Cheers, Gershon Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2020 at 9:23 PM LOL!

Michael Tor July 10, 2020 at 4:42 PM A nice effort Kim for the contest. Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2020 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Michael.