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Beauty Pocks

As deep as beauty pocks. It’s cheap light and moon rocks. The pull of pow’r suspense - A full figured expense. A grand trip into space, Is manned by human race. This dame was but a child. Launched fame ~ undaunted, wild. 7/10/2020 Verses In Essence - 8 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/16/2020 1:49:00 PM

Such a beautiful and profound tale of the journey of mankind into space. Your words present intriguing thoughts Kim. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2020 5:23:00 PM

Thanks, Aditi, my friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2020 3:18:00 AM

Congratulations on a win, no doubt in my mind if I had read this before. But now that I have, I fully get it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2020 5:58:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2020 8:10:00 PM

Nicely crafted, Kim. Brought back memories of the missions to the moon. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2020 10:23:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 4:23:00 AM

A lively piece, Kim, I am blessed to have read it, my compliments for your righteous efforts and for your placing truly, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2020 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, William!

Joseph May

Date: 7/11/2020 5:25:00 PM

Very nicely written Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2020 6:47:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 2:06:00 PM

Well done, KIm. Congrats for your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2020 3:05:00 PM

Thank you, beautiful friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2020 7:13:00 PM

The open bar is now serving 'cheap light and moon rocks. Don't know why, but something struck me that way. ~ Lite Beer, anyone?! lol. Cheers, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2020 9:23:00 PM

LOL!

Michael Tor

Date: 7/10/2020 4:42:00 PM

A nice effort Kim for the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2020 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Michael.