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Beauty Personified

I was lost in your cherubic face, Searching places of great elegence, Your eyes like two perfected diamonds, Your skin like the fair greeny fields, Where farmers longs to get greater yields, Such perfection my eyes never saw Your hair was pure and long, As the wind blew it to and fro, My heart did imagine, My mind did wonder, Is this beauty a work of wisdom? Is this beauty conspiracy of fine art? Is it the magnificence of the creator's hands? Such perfection my eyes never saw My eyes are typically sceptical, My mind continously critical, Yet I found you flawless, Excelling above the others, With talking lashes, And walking teeth, Like white sheep in the fair fields, Such perfection my eyes never saw Some said your were almost there, One step away from excellence, A breath away from beauty magnificence, I saw you, I saw light Your beauty your light,your light your might, Against all sceptism and criticism, Your were beauty personified, Such perfection my eyes never saw

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Date: 1/21/2013 7:32:00 PM
Gaylord, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2013 5:22:00 PM
Welcome to soup, I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love
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