Beauty of Nature

big white snowflakes fall
and land upon the garden - -
a puppy scampers

Jack Horne, posted a few seconds too for Linda-Marie’s Beauty of Nature contest, lol!
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Grisetti Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 5:06 PM
a lovely haiku, especially the puppy.
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 10:20 AM
I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Jack. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 9:18 PM
this is very much like I think a real haiku should be. The last line has that "twist" to it. Perfecto!
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Very nice capturing of an image here in this haiku jack...best wishes.
Sivey Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 10:51 AM
This is a wonderful write Jack, I really enjoyed it a lot! I wish this could have been allowed into the contest, you would have done extremely well! I love the description here, and a puppy, how cute! Wonderful piece my friend! Great Work!!
Gasun Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:03 AM
A nice haiku you have penned, Jack! Good luck in the contest!
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