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Beauty of Nature

big white snowflakes fall and land upon the garden - - a puppy scampers Jack Horne, posted a few seconds too for Linda-Marie’s Beauty of Nature contest, lol!

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/11/2012 5:06:00 PM

a lovely haiku, especially the puppy.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 10:20:00 AM

I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Jack. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 9:18:00 PM

this is very much like I think a real haiku should be. The last line has that "twist" to it. Perfecto!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/6/2012 12:19:00 PM

Very nice capturing of an image here in this haiku jack...best wishes.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/6/2012 10:51:00 AM

This is a wonderful write Jack, I really enjoyed it a lot! I wish this could have been allowed into the contest, you would have done extremely well! I love the description here, and a puppy, how cute! Wonderful piece my friend! Great Work!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/6/2012 9:03:00 AM

A nice haiku you have penned, Jack! Good luck in the contest!