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Beauty of Nature

Sun smiles on bright sky,
Splendid fields and mountains laid
Cold breeze, creations cheer.















Poem by: Leonora Galinta
                Aug. 5, 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

August 22, 2012 at 8:42 PM

About your haiku once again.... i'm closing my eyes and feeling your poem... its a beautiful sensation feeling... i wonder if birds close their eyes as they glide in to that sunny side sky.... love your haiku...xox~pd

Len Gasun

August 30, 2012 at 8:53 PM

sorry: if in place of when

Len Gasun

August 30, 2012 at 8:51 PM

thank you so much my dear friend, PD. yes, i love your idea. when i will replace "bright sky" to either phrase, "bird's glide" or bird's fly, I realized it gives more sensible feeling of the nature and it will still keep the required meter of the haiku for the contest which is 5/7/5 syllables. MILLION THANKS MY DEAR. hugs, leonora

Poet Destroyer A

August 22, 2012 at 8:39 PM

leonora, I'm stopping by to give you a second comment on this poem.... first i will tell you about the comments you can't find on my poems... if for some REASON, you are scanning a poem you already read, and don't see your comment... chances are your comment, is on one of my 3rd pages of comments.. ever poem page holds over 30 comments,, after the first 30 your poem gets a second page... LOL.. does that sound confusing. I've noticed that you and others have questioned onld comments.

Poet Destroyer A

August 22, 2012 at 8:40 PM

old comments...

Sherese Gooden

August 15, 2012 at 7:48 PM

Beautiful Haiku.

Kash Poet

August 10, 2012 at 5:59 AM

Wonderful imagery here Leonara!Love it!Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.

Richard Palmer

August 7, 2012 at 10:22 AM

nicely done,like the feeling,hooray Leonora

Len Gasun

August 8, 2012 at 8:32 AM

That commendation of your had uplifted my spirit, Richard. Thank you so much. Good luck always!

Sara Kendrick

August 6, 2012 at 2:16 PM

I really like the flow of this one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my work and taking time to comment...Sara

Len Gasun

August 7, 2012 at 12:19 AM

A million thanks to you again, Sara. Best wishes and luck to you always.

Jack Horne

August 6, 2012 at 9:28 AM

lovely haiku,Leonora

Len Gasun

August 7, 2012 at 12:07 AM

Thank you, Jack. Wish you all the luck in the contest too!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 6, 2012 at 7:21 AM

Leonora, beautiful composed haiku - bravo, well done - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

August 6, 2012 at 7:28 AM

Hello, Anne-Lise! Thank you very much for the inspiration, support and encouragement. Belated happy happy birthday again. I am extremely happy to have a great poet and good friend who is always there.