Beauty of Nature

after the drizzle-
                                              on a swan's lingering trail
                                                   the touch of rainbow
                                                           


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/21/2012 2:01:00 AM
Precise and a beauty!
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:42:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:56:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win, loved it first time...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. Imagery was amazing in so few words.
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Date: 8/18/2012 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Kash!!!!!
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:27:00 PM
Knew it was a winner - congratulations.
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:09:00 AM
I remember I absolutely LOVED this one, Kashinath. Glad to finally see it get the honor it deserves. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:49:00 AM
Very nice... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your splendid win in Brian's "#197" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:43:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win, a beautiful image..David
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Date: 8/8/2012 10:01:00 PM
oh! My Kash, it's still August the 8th here.... well in 2 hours it will be the 9th... I don't even know where your from... by the way, i love the image and dance of your haiku... nature and the beauty of her trail... xox~pd
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:10:00 PM
what a haiku. thanks for your kind comments
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:27:00 PM
Fabulous combination of images.
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Date: 8/6/2012 6:57:00 PM
hmm what's a swan's trail? the [wake] in the water? // Yes Kash you can write in English and INSERT a Bengali PHRASE..folks are getting a wee bit carried a way with the freedom LOL [I only say this because I can not judge if their second language is correct only the english part!] Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2012 2:59:00 PM
Beuatiful words done with excellent skill! You stuck to the traditional format which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/6/2012 2:12:00 PM
A swan and a rainbow in one nature scene is fantastic..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:20:00 AM
beautiful haiku, Kash. Congrats on your wins, my friend
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:01:00 AM
Yeah, i can imagine it. u're such a genius.. haha
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Date: 8/6/2012 1:31:00 AM
so right as rain, kashi.. ohh, you wow me!... come over!... huggs!
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Date: 8/5/2012 9:36:00 PM
Superb Haiku you have penned, Kash. I wish you the best and good luck!
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Date: 8/5/2012 4:20:00 PM
Your haiku skills are great and I sure need to practice more. Wonderful poem Kash. love phyl
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Kash, wish you the best in the contest.
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
Wow Kash, the image you bring forth with your words is just beautiful, love it! All the best for the contest :)
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:47:00 AM
Wow, the immense power of your words is incredible my friend! I really enjoyed this fantastic poem that you have created! This write is very beautiful, I just love its grandiosity! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/4/2012 9:59:00 PM
oh my gosh, you never cease to amaze me with your haiku skills. Thanks for the fave, and I'm faving you back. This is a wonderful visual.
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