Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Beauty of Nature

after the drizzle-
                                              on a swan's lingering trail
                                                   the touch of rainbow
                                                           


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Bhavna Khemlani November 21, 2012 at 2:01 AM Precise and a beauty!

Debbie Guzzi August 19, 2012 at 10:42 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams August 19, 2012 at 1:56 AM Kash, congrats on your win, loved it first time...David

Carol Eastman August 18, 2012 at 11:45 AM Congratulations on the win. Imagery was amazing in so few words.

Len Gasun August 18, 2012 at 3:19 AM Congratulations, Kash!!!!!

Joann Grisetti August 17, 2012 at 4:27 PM Knew it was a winner - congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2012 at 11:09 AM I remember I absolutely LOVED this one, Kashinath. Glad to finally see it get the honor it deserves. Luv, Andrea

Terry O'Leary August 17, 2012 at 5:49 AM Very nice... congratulations on your win... Terry

Carol Sunshine Brown August 17, 2012 at 4:49 AM Congratulations on your splendid win in Brian's "#197" contest Kash. Love, Carol

David Williams August 17, 2012 at 2:43 AM Kash, congrats on your win, a beautiful image..David

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2012 at 10:01 PM oh! My Kash, it's still August the 8th here.... well in 2 hours it will be the 9th... I don't even know where your from... by the way, i love the image and dance of your haiku... nature and the beauty of her trail... xox~pd

Karen Croft August 7, 2012 at 5:10 PM what a haiku. thanks for your kind comments

Joann Grisetti August 6, 2012 at 7:27 PM Fabulous combination of images.

Debbie Guzzi August 6, 2012 at 6:57 PM hmm what's a swan's trail? the [wake] in the water? // Yes Kash you can write in English and INSERT a Bengali PHRASE..folks are getting a wee bit carried a way with the freedom LOL [I only say this because I can not judge if their second language is correct only the english part!] Light & Love

Matthew Anish August 6, 2012 at 2:59 PM Beuatiful words done with excellent skill! You stuck to the traditional format which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick August 6, 2012 at 2:12 PM A swan and a rainbow in one nature scene is fantastic..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jack Horne August 6, 2012 at 9:20 AM beautiful haiku, Kash. Congrats on your wins, my friend

Dinda Minardi August 6, 2012 at 9:01 AM Yeah, i can imagine it. u're such a genius.. haha

Nette Onclaud August 6, 2012 at 1:31 AM so right as rain, kashi.. ohh, you wow me!... come over!... huggs!

Len Gasun August 5, 2012 at 9:36 PM Superb Haiku you have penned, Kash. I wish you the best and good luck!

Phyllis Babcock August 5, 2012 at 4:20 PM Your haiku skills are great and I sure need to practice more. Wonderful poem Kash. love phyl

Modupe Sefunmi August 5, 2012 at 1:18 PM Beautiful Haiku Kash, wish you the best in the contest.

Wilma Neels August 5, 2012 at 12:25 PM Wow Kash, the image you bring forth with your words is just beautiful, love it! All the best for the contest :)

Russell Sivey August 5, 2012 at 10:47 AM Wow, the immense power of your words is incredible my friend! I really enjoyed this fantastic poem that you have created! This write is very beautiful, I just love its grandiosity! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2012 at 9:59 PM oh my gosh, you never cease to amaze me with your haiku skills. Thanks for the fave, and I'm faving you back. This is a wonderful visual.