Beauty of Nature

soft nest in woodlands

  a baby fawn under mom

    life untouched renews 





Poems by Shar
Form: haiku  5/7/5


For Linda-Marie's contest
"Beauty of Nature"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Beauty Of Nature" contest Shar. Sorry for the belated congratulations but much going on at this time. Love, Carol
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August 15, 2012 at 11:29 PM
Sharon , a wonderful congratulations :-) in Linda's "BEAUTY OF NATURE" contest.. have yourself a good one* xox~PD
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 6:48 AM
pure delight, sagron... congrats on your fine!..) huggs!
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 2:50 AM
Sharon congrats on your great win....David
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Very nicely done, Sharon. Congrats in the Beauty of Nature contest.
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 3:46 PM
A lovely haiku, Sharon. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 11:07 AM
CONGRATS SHAR ON A FABULOUS ENTRY AND 9TH PLACE WIN LUV..
Harrington Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 3:17 PM
Lovely, I love nature and wildlife, you captured both. :) Tanya
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August 5, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Great one for Linda's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..My husband had spinal surgery on Friday..He had spinal stenosis which was causing back pain, down the leg pain, and weakness in trying to walk..Thanks for stopping by my work...Sara
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:14 PM
This is wonderful Haiku about Nature. Good luck, Sharon.
Onclaud Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 11:19 AM
the visual you create is astounding, sha... greeeat 'ku!
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:20 PM
this is fantastic!! I love this picture.
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August 4, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Thankyou Andrea for stopping by and always leaving such a nice message. Hope you have a lovely weekend..............Smiles
Wellington Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Loving your Haiku Sharon, I am seeing a nice woodland picture. Thanks for your comments and visit. One love. Joy Wells.
Ruebel Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Joe for reading me today and leaving such a nice message. Looking forward to being here again and enjoying your lovely poetry... Smiles
Guzzi Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 5:59 PM
you need to gramatically join 2 of the lines- a baby fawn/nests under its mother--sunrise [line 3 needs to be another sensory bit of input that is happening at the same moment] everything must be objective Light & Love
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August 3, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Hello Debbie, how are you hon? Hope all is well.....Thank you for your critique ...... Love , Shar
Sivey Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 4:38 PM
This is a truly beautiful piece, truly beautiful! I really enjoyed reading the comfort within this write, a well written poem Shar! I love this fabulous piece! Great Work!!
Benson Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Precise poem, with lovely imagery.
Ruebel Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Thank you for reading me today and leaving such a nice message....Come back again Ingibo when you feel like it...........Smiles
Williams Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Shar, I like this image a lot, good luck..david
Ruebel Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Thank you dear David, your words are always so kind and up lifting......................Smiles
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